Assessment Plan and Learning Module
EDUC 4151
Joanne Reid
Vancouver Community College
December 22, 2016
English 081 – Advanced Adult Basic Education Upgrading and University
Preparation
Learner Characteristics:
The learners in English 081, similar to students in most other classes, are
diverse in many ways:
A student entering into any class comes
with a ‘black box’ of sorts that holds ‘an array of invisibles’ that, among
other things, includes the educational backgrounds, values, feelings, and
beliefs of student and former teachers, family, and life experiences[1].
This is also true in the online
classroom; however, the one similarity in the online English 081 course is that
this will be the first online learning class for most of the students enrolled,
yet there will be a wide range of diversity in terms of using and accessing
technology; some students will have limited word processing skills.
- Students likely enroll in English 081 to satisfy necessary pre-requisites or required standards of written English to access specific training with the trades or vocational areas, or to gain acceptance into the Adult Dogwood or university programs/courses. The class enrollment size is 12-20 students.
- More than 35% of the students will have done poorly in high school English courses, thus being ineligible to access University courses or other training/trades/vocational programs throughout the province.
- Many students will openly express a dislike of reading and writing.
- Approximately 25% of learners in the online class are International students or new immigrants who have come from different countries. (Although 2nd language learners are discouraged from taking an online English course, some still choose to do so.) Often these students have stronger academic skills, but writing English is especially challenging; consequently, written feedback in addition to a a rubric tends to be more helpful feedback for learning. Furthermore, International students tend to have different views regarding the role and/or power of the instructor. They are apt to be hesitant to ask an instructor for help outside of class or to express a different opinion than what they believe the instructor wants to hear.
- Students will represent different socio-economic groups, although typically those who are not International students, tend to come from a lower socio-economic background; more than 50% of the students will require financial assistance and/or other funding sources; at least 40% of the students are working either part-time or full-time; hence the reasons for taking English 081 online.
- Students will have different attitudes towards learning and/or ability to complete assignments based on a variety of factors: age, personal and/or family values, previous school experiences and expectations, maturity, natural acuity, learning preferences, personality, available time for study, working, unemployed, or underemployed
- Learners can be as young as 19 years old and may view some of their classmates as old enough to be their parents, although a certain anonymity in the online classes makes this less evident.
- Some students will be motivated to develop their skills because they have a clear goal to increase their reason for doing well in the course.
- Many learners in the class have lower literacy and self-efficacy skills.
- Some learners have a tendency to feel victimized whenever challenges come their way; they have not yet learned how to manage their time nor have they learned to take responsibility for choices they make that cause them to lag behind in the course. The online environment is not especially suited to these learners, either.
Assignment Objective: Critical and
Creative Thinking
- Students
will be able to use active reading strategies to read and accurately identify
subject/topic, main idea, supporting ideas, and sequence of an article.
- Students
will be able to use the steps of the summary writing process (read, pause,
reflect, outline, draft, revise, edit) to write a summary
- Students
will be able to use appropriate MLA formatting conventions for final
submission of summary.
Lesson instructions to learners and assessment
practices
Finding the Main Idea - Writing a Summary
In the previous learning module, we learned how to read critically and
actively. We also learned how to find the
main idea in a piece of writing—whether the writing is an article, letter to an
editor, paragraph, or essay—and to identify the supports. In this module, our focus is on summary
writing.
A.
Introduction to Summary Writing
- Summarizing is an important skill that each one of us likely uses daily: we talk about our day, we summarize a movie, and summarize in myriad other ways.
- Access the Padlet-Summary and add two ways in which people might use summary skills either at home, at work, or in classes; add your contributions before ________ /2 points
*Complete LearningCurve for Summary
*Complete the Post-Test
for Summarizing
*= post-test for grade /10 marks
3. Click on the
picture to watch this short video (3.04 minutes)
(If you cannot access it,
copy and paste this URL into your address bar https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGWO1ldEhtQ
4.
*After watching the video, write down the steps
for writing a summary. How many were you
able to remember? Review the video again
to see what steps/guidelines you missed.
Answer at least one of the questions related to writing a
summary – if all questions are already answered, add an example or provide
feedback. If you have a question that no
one has already asked, post your question.
(Possible /3 marks for adding a question that requires an extended response beyond ‘yes’ or ‘no’ or answering/adding information or offering thoughtful feedback to a classmate’s question – see rubric in discussion area)
(Possible /3 marks for adding a question that requires an extended response beyond ‘yes’ or ‘no’ or answering/adding information or offering thoughtful feedback to a classmate’s question – see rubric in discussion area)
B-1 Summary Writing – Access and Read the Article
A summary can be tricky to write at first because
it’s tempting to include too much or too little information. Following these
steps will help you with your summary. Writing
a good summary demonstrates that you clearly understand a text and that you can
communicate your knowledge of the article to your readers
1 Article to
Summarize: “An Immigrant’s Split Personality” by Sun-Kyung Yi
Access in Blackboard Reading Info/Articles Content Area
Access in Blackboard Reading Info/Articles Content Area
2 Preview - title, introduction
and the conclusion
3. Based on what you have previewed, what do you expect the topic and
controlling idea will be?
4. Skim the article to get a feel for the author’s tone, style, and the controlling idea.
4. Skim the article to get a feel for the author’s tone, style, and the controlling idea.
5 Actively reread the article.
7.
What is the main idea? (topic + controlling idea)
B-2 Preparation for Summary Writing
Before working on
your summary, complete the following:
- In point form, contrast the characteristics/behaviors Yi describes she has that are specific to the Korean and the Canadian halves of her personality.
- In point form, list what behaviors her Korean family and friends expect from Yi.
- In point form, list what assumptions her Canadian friends
- expect because of her Korean background
- Identify the main points and the memorable statement in paragraph 10 of the article.
- Writing - draft and edit a summary – See B-3 below.
(Note:
Use the following step-by-step instructions. KEEP a copy of all of your working
documents for this assignment —rough notes, marked article, first draft,
etc.—for reference after you receive your marked summary. Do NOT re-write your rough work; doing so
is a waste of time because pre-writing and first drafts are intended to be
messy; they provide evidence of critical thinking.)
B-3 Summary Writing ~
Summary Guidelines
1. Build
an outline – Use a simple
“sandwich” paragraph outline template.
a.
State the main point first. Use your
own words – try not to paraphrase; instead, put away the text and ask yourself
what the author said. Using your own
words will help you avoid plagiarism.
b. List the main key points; make sure that what you include
in the outline are key points and
not minor details.
c.
Unless the examples in the article are
essential, do not include them in your summary. If you include them, remember
to explain their importance or connect them to the key idea.
d.
State the author’s conclusion or recommendations.
2. Because your summary will be no longer than one
paragraph, you will not require a thesis statement. Instead, write a clear topic
sentence. This
is the key to any well-written summary.
(Review the main points from your outline to create a topic statement that
clearly communicates what the entire text was trying to achieve.) State the main
point in the topic statement.
(If you find that you are not able to do this based on your outline, review the
article to ensure your outline lists the key points) See examples below.
- Use the topic statement as the introductory sentence of your summary.
- Write a clear sentence for each key point; if the article is a shorter one, combine the main points in one clear sentence. These sentences make up the body of the summary.
- Ensure your sentences are organized in logical order similar to the original article.
- Include appropriate transitions (then, however, also, moreover) to help with the overall structure and flow of the summary. (Ensure your summary does not read like a Table of Contents
- Write using present tense throughout. (Yi writes, Yi explains, Yi concludes….when Yi goes…)
- Ensure you have included the writer’s name, where the article is from if available, date of the article title of the work – typically in the topic statement.
- After using the writer’s full name in the topic sentence, use only her surname (Yi) or ‘the writer’ or ‘the author’ throughout the remainder of the summary.
- Be concise: a summary should not be equal in length to the original text; the summary should not be more than 20% of the entire article.
- Unless absolutely necessary, Do NOT include any long quotes; those used should easily flow within a sentence and must be cited;
- If you use the author’s words, cite them.
- Paraphrase carefully; if you take more than 4 significant words in a row from the article, be sure to use quotation marks and add a citation to indicate which paragraph it comes from;
- Format your summary according to MLA formatting conventions (Since the only source for this article is the Globe and Mail, you do not have to create a Works Cited page.)
- Edit: Check for Accuracy. Reread your summary to be sure you have accurately represented the author’s ideas and key points.
- Edit: Check Citations: Check that you have correctly cited anything directly quoted from the text.
- Edit: Check that there is No personal opinions or commentary.
- Revise your summary
for style, grammar, and punctuation. Be concise
. Eliminate needless words and repetitions. - Ask someone else to read your summary for clarity; revise accordingly.
- Before submitting your summary, print
out a copy and let it ‘sit’ for a day or so…(OK,
maybe you don’t have a day before it’s due, but try to let it ‘sit’ for some
time before you hand it in.)Walk
away from your summary and your computer; think about something else.When
you return to your summary, re-read it out
loud or ask someone else to read it
to you
i. Listen carefully for flow
ii. Check for any awkward wording iii. Check punctuation - Consider what grade you can expect for your work by comparing your summary to the checklist Blackboard - Writing Support - Summary - Checklist and rubric posted in the assignment drop box. Blackboard- DropBox-Summary-Rubric
- If you are unsure of any of the terms or items listed in the rubric, you may wish to review the summarizing video before making final revisions.
(If
you cannot access it, copy and paste this URL into your address bar
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VwEl-MiZH0E
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VwEl-MiZH0E
Submit your summary through the drop box
before midnight on …
Rational for types of assessment chosen
When students enter English 081, they are expected to be
able to write a paragraph and to have a solid foundation using grammar and
punctuation correctly. However,
experience has shown that many of the students are weak in these skills. Hence, basic grammar, paragraph (main idea,
topic sentence, supports, and conclusion) writing and active reading will have
been reviewed during the first weeks of the course. Students will have submitted a basic
paragraph for feedback (formative assessment) with an opportunity to make
changes accordingly prior to the summary writing assignment.
Assessment Type(s)
for Learning and of Learning
* Formative
Assessment ~ Complete the Solo LearningCurve: Practice Finding Main Ideas
LearningCurve
is a formative assessment that “provides feedback to guide the learning
process” (Sewell, Frith, & Colvin, 2010, p.300). The LearningCurve activity
gives students an opportunity to practice finding the main ideas and learning
about summary until they have reached a specific skill level. Because of the
different skills levels in English 081, LearningCurve is an efficient way for
learners to determine how much time they need to spend reviewing concepts. When students answer questions in LearningCurve
correctly, each questions becomes progressively difficult until the main
concepts covered in the unit have been answered correctly at least 2 times
without error. Hence, those learners who
know the material do not have to spend additional time with review; whereas,
those students needing extra practice can do that at their own pace. And, these students are given immediate
feedback to help them better understand the concepts.
Following is a detailed description of LearningCurve.
Game-like quizzes motivate students to engage with
their course material without the pressure of grades or classroom settings, and
reporting tools help teachers get a sense of what their class needs to focus
on, attuned to the individual needs of each student.
How LearningCurve
works?
Students
receive instant feedback after each question in LearningCurve. Not only does
this assist with retention; it also corrects them immediately on any
misconceptions or mistakes.
Students
who have a firm grasp of the material get plenty of practice but proceed
through the activity relatively quickly. Students who are unprepared or who
need more help will receive as much practice as they need to master a concept.
At
any time during a LearningCurve activity students can click on links to online
instruction for more explanation and examples.
Instructors
can see how many questions each student answered before reaching the target
score, how many students have completed each activity, and how individual
students are performing, as well as composite results for the class as a whole.
Questions explained
When
students select a LearningCurve activity, they are presented with a series of
questions. As soon as students click on an answer choice, they receive feedback
for that choice. Students continue answering questions throughout the activity
and are able to build up their score by answering correctly.
Questions
in each activity are divided into levels. If a student gets a question correct
without hints, the next question for that topic will come from the next most
difficult level. In this way, LearningCurve is adaptive and is able to adjust
its level of difficulty based on a student’s performance.
Students
are able to work through each activity at their own pace; they can take a break
at any point and return to the activity at a later time.
Helpful tips
LearningCurve
offers many helpful tips to assist students during an activity:
Hints
The
“Get a Hint” option either provides students with quick tips to help them
answer a question or removes incorrect choices one at a
time, letting students know each time why a removed answer is incorrect.
Feedback
If a student answers a question
incorrectly, LearningCurve gives feedback about that answer. The feedback
explains why that choice was incorrect, but doesn’t tell students the correct
answer. Students then have the opportunity to try to answer again.
If
the question is too difficult, students are able to click on “Show Me” to see
the answer. However, no points are awarded and the student continues to be
given questions from that same topic and difficulty level.
Cross-Reference
Each
LearningCurve question has a topic-specific link that guides students to the
course reference material, so that they can use that material to assist them in
answering the question correctly. Referencing this additional material doesn’t
cost students any points.
How Scoring
Works?
Students
complete a LearningCurve activity by answering questions correctly and scoring
the necessary number of points to reach the designated Target Score.
Harder
questions are worth more points than easier questions, and students earn fewer
points on a given question if they access hints or make more incorrect guesses
before answering the question correctly.
LearningCurve
does not penalize students for answering a question incorrectly. The number of questions
in the activity is not predetermined, so the number of total points a student
can earn does not decrease if he or she gets a question wrong. If a student
guesses incorrectly, asks for hints, or requests the correct answer, then the
student will be required to answer more questions in order to reach the Target
Score.
Additional review
To help students organize content
review, LearningCurve offers students a “Personalized Study Plan.” Students can
access this study plan during or after the activity by clicking on the progress
bar that appears below each question. The study plan breaks down their
performance on each topic and presents them with suggestions for further
practice.”
Source: Macmillan Media for Instructors [web]
Retrieved from http://cmg.screenstepslive.com/s/MacmillanMedia/m/LearningCurveIM/l/125152-introduction-to-learningcurve
*
Summative Assessment ~
Complete the
Post-Test for Summary
This is a 10 item auto-scored quiz that assesses what
students have learned by working through the instructional material and
adaptive practice in the unit. This assessment is worth 10 points and is
counted within the quiz weighting for the course grade. Research suggests that learners are more
motivated to access learning supports when they are ‘rewarded’. However, even more important is that I have
access to how well each student did on the quiz within the instructor console, which
will help me determine how well learners understand the concept of summary
writing. When marking students’
summaries, I can also refer back to the assessment to compare the summary to
test results.
*
Formative Assessment ~
Lifting the Fog ~
Go to the ‘Fog’ Discussion Area
Sewell et al. (2010)
suggest using the technique of ‘muddiest point’ to assess knowledge. They add that “reflections discussions are
techniques to obtain feedback useful for refining the instruction process”
(p. 300). While Lifting the Fog
is not a reflection discussion forum per se, requiring students to post a
question, answer a question, or add to a post again provides review or students
and again alerts me to areas that require more specific guidelines. This forum again provides opportunity for
students to review. With a small class, a forum like this works because there
are enough different types of questions learners can ask about the topic.
*
Formative Assessment ~
Summary
Writing Checklist
Fluckiger (2010)
claims that “the process of using the single point checklist embodies formative
assessment and enables effective student self-assessment” (p.18). She claims that students need to be taught
how to compare their work to specific learning targets. Fluckiger (2010) believes that the single
point rubric or checklist provides a clear set of criteria for quality work
that promotes higher student engagement. For students at the lower levels of English
writing, I have found that clear instructions, while they may seem sufficient,
are not enough to ensure students complete assignments correctly. Having a yes, no, ? checklist for students to
complete before submitting an assignment is one more way for them to assess
their work before submitting it for a mark.
*
Summative Assessment ~
Summary Rubric
“When instructors wish to
analyze learning achievement demonstrated in papers, grading rubrics can be
used to communicate criteria to learners and facilitate the instructor in
providing fair and timely feedback to the learner” (Angelo & Cross, Huba &
Freed as cited in Sewell et al., 2010, p. 302). Because summary writing in an essential
writing skill that is required for additional writing throughout the term and
in future courses, students must master this skill to do well in the
course. Hence, a rubric will be used because
it “clearly specifies the expectations for the activity [summary] and the
effort[2]
[skills] required by the student to achieve a desired score” (Conrad &
Donaldson, 2011, p.29). Moreover, not
only does a rubric give students a checklist to ensure they have followed the
assignment instructions, it also tends to reduce the time required to provide
timely feedback to learners.
Although I have
often used a multiple-scaled rubric, I found that a student’s work does not
necessarily fit ‘neatly’ into one of the prescribed ‘boxes’. Hence, I have moved to using a single point
rubric on which I use different colours to indicate different standards
achieved. (See Summary Rubric.) In
addition to using the single-point rubric, individual comments will be included
on the rubric and editing symbols will be placed throughout each student’s
written assignment to provide additional feedback specific to that student’s
writing, which I believe is more meaningful for the students in my course.
Fluckiger (2010) agrees that ‘descriptive feedback is more helpful than a
number, a grade, a score, a ranking, or a single descriptive label” (p.20). She adds that various theorist support using
single point rubrics to enhance student learning including “Vygotsky’s zone of
proximal development and theories described in the category of self-regulated
learning” (p. 21). However, Fluckiger
(2010) also encourages instructors to involve students in the development of a
single-point rubric because her research shows that doing so further increases
student motivation for writers. This is
something I have not done, nor have I tried this. However, after reading her research, I will
likely require students to develop their own writing checklist based on their
own reflections and feedback.
*
Formative Assessment ~
Self-Reflection
of Summary Writing and Feedback
While summative
assessment is important in monitoring learner progress, Smith (2015) claims
that formative assessment is “the most optimal form of assessment for
understanding what the students understand about how to learn”[3]
(Use of Formative Assessment, para 1). The notion of reflective journals is
based on developing awareness. Griffin
(as cited in Thompson & Erdil-Moody, 2015) delineates reflection as “a
conscious effort on the part of an individual to carefully consider the
beliefs, theories and personal experiences that affect his or her action” (p.
35). In their research, they
assert that “teachers learn from actual practice, personal experiences, and observation, as
opposed to the traditional lecture format…as a result, recent literature on
teacher education has emphasized the integration of reflective practice into
content course syllabi (p.2). Based on
this and other research related to reflection of learning, reflecting on their
writing will help students develop important meta-cognition skills.
Therefore, when
marked summaries are returned to students, they will be required to complete a
reflection assignment.
References
Fluckiger, Jarene, "Single Point
Rubric: A Tool for Responsible Student Self-Assessment" (2010). Teacher Education Faculty Publications. Paper 5.
http://digitalcommons.unomaha.edu/tedfacpub/5
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[1]Adapted
from Rivers,
B. A., Richardson, J. E., & Price, L. (2014). Promoting Reflection in
Asynchronous Virtual Learning Spaces: Tertiary Distance Tutors' Conceptions.
p.9.
[2] I
oppose the word ‘effort’ in a rubric because effort is not necessarily
measureable against skill development.
Some students put in an inordinate amount of effort, yet the submitted
assignment may still lack the requisite skills to pass.
[3] Formative
assessment is ongoing and cyclical. It offers information about what learners
know or do not know and how they decide what they need to know. Information of
this type can be used to improve instruction as well as advance student
learning. Formative assessment is
important in improving learners' metacognition because this form of feedback
engages learners in thinking about their learning and progress (Smith, 2015)
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